Here's a revised version of my resume. I got feedback from a job-readiness program and a guest software engineer. Frequent feedback is that I should have more metrics;
I seem to focus on the qualatative aspects of what I do in written form, and never have trouble quantifying what I have written. Upon first review, I may not be able to quantify everything but once finalized I can go back to note important quantities for vocal delivery. Confidentiality also protects many concrete metrics, unfortunately.

I continue to list the Day Laborer position because it shows that I am actively doing something for money. I added the iSpooge Daily work despite it being self-directed, because I developed important work during that time. I have been apprehensive to list it due to experience with dishonest companies.